Who Really Cares? wrote: Kenny wrote: After alot of tweaking and some great feedback, I can finally release bOUNTY:
bOUNTY (TV Pilot) - After a night of heavy drinking, a devil-may-care Gambler wakes up in the middle of the desert finding himself in debt, hired by the Mexican Cartel to pay it off...and wanted by Nevada police for murder. [Dark Comedy, Crime Drama]
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Cool I did start reading the 2 drafts but I felt bad forming an opinion on unfinished work. Not that I didn't like it but the odd little problems I had were mainly with the stuff you pointed out as unfinished/in the wrong place.
Read away with this one! But even if it was a work in progress, any feedback is welcome. Riku pointed put a big plot hole me and a couple of other people missed so I immediately fixed it.
I'm always interested in what people find doesn't work but so far the response has been overwhelming positive. This is definitely the best thing I've ever written, and unlike my previous works I find myself cracking this open to read my favorite parts. I am so proud of it and love to hear what other people think about it.
Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2013 8:54 am
