Random Thoughts! v2.0

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby QWERTY » Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:55 pm

Ryudo wrote:
QWERTY™ wrote: You guys know that the D-man is lurking, reading this and absolutely dying to flip off on one of his diartibes.

:lol: This will flip his lid.

MGS on 3DS is a remake,Kojima is a genius, Heavy Rain is the best game ever made,Xenoblade is awesome,FFXIII is the best FF ever made. Asian gifs suck.


He'll be back. Oh yes, he will be back.
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Kenny » Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:37 pm

Funny thing about Dorian is I think he can be a decent guy who can conjure up interesting discussions.

But he's too hung up on trying to find higher meaning in life through any means possible rather than simply enjoy it for what it is (and what it can be).

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby wude » Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:41 pm

Kinda miss his gifs
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Bluecast » Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:43 pm

wude wrote: Kinda miss his gifs

No. That's like missing being jabbed in the pee hole.
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby wude » Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:44 pm

Ryudo wrote:
wude wrote: Kinda miss his gifs

No.

:lol:
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby KiBa » Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:58 pm

In all seriousness, I miss Dor. Hope he comes back someday.

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Bluecast » Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:28 pm

KiBa wrote: In all seriousness, I miss Dor. Hope he comes back someday.

He will then get pissed and leave again and cycle repeat
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Kenny » Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:34 pm

Ryudo wrote:
KiBa wrote: In all seriousness, I miss Dor. Hope he comes back someday.

He will then get pissed and leave again and cycle repeat


Cause we all know he's the only one that does that.

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Peter » Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:41 pm

BOOM!

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Bluecast » Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:02 pm

Like it or not I will be here til I die. Even if lurking after pete bans me for peeing in the plant.

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Spokane » Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:11 pm

Ryudo wrote: Like it or not I will not leave here, EVEN IF I DIE.


You show that landsharks who the boss is.

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Bluecast » Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:18 pm

As a ghost I will haunt you all because I'm so bored and no after life..life
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby AnimeGamer183 » Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:52 pm

Kenny wrote: Funny thing about Dorian is I think he can be a decent guy who can conjure up interesting discussions.

But he's too hung up on trying to find higher meaning in life through any means possible rather than simply enjoy it for what it is (and what it can be).


Aint that the truth, the poor guy makes things alot more complicated than necessary. And I just cant forgive him for not giving more credit to Xenoblade.

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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby Kenny » Fri Oct 26, 2012 1:12 am

SCRIPTSHADOW POSTED THE DEUX LOGLINE AMONG THIRTY OTHERS ON HIS LATEST BLOG POST!!!!

http://scriptshadow.blogspot.com/2012/1 ... ts-to.html

Deux
Action/Thriller
A twenty something signs up as a weapons tester in a high-tech duel to wipe his debt, but to get his pay he must defeat his next opponent--an adversary he can't seem to kill.

Would I read? - This logline suffers from being too vague. A "twenty something?" Can we come up with a protagonist we can actually visualize? How about "A genius computer hacker?" Also, the ending kills this logline: "An adversary he can't seem to kill." Way way waaaay too general. You need to be more specific.


Thinking it over now, like if I were to pick a movie in Redbox and I saw my own logline i'd think it was a crappy low-end action film based on the way its written. Might have to bring it back to the drawing board once more.

I was more interested in what people actually thought of the first ten pages (which I submitted and you can download in the link). One guy thought it was too confusing but another said I was one of the few who had a "voice". And that is one of the best compliments you can ever receive aside from "this kicks ass, we need to shoot this PRONTO."

Unfortunately, being at the bottom of the list not too many people have read it. People thinking its some generic Shoot Em Up action film based on the logline doesn't help matters. But I hope to get whatever feedback possible. In truth, DEUX is the weakest logline compared to my other two scripts. But ironically, its the best written i've script so far. When I submit TECH and PROJECT EXODUS, i'm hoping to get more positive vibes.
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Re: Random Thoughts! v2.0

Postby KiBa » Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:17 am

Good ten pages! How about "An 'Occupy Parents' Basement' graduate signs up as a weapons tester..."? ;-)
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