wude wrote: Great job ShenSun, the game has the vibe of shenmue, the music is of course awesome
Thanks Wude. I hope you enjoyed the section where I included your work.
Did you get the good or bad ending?
wude wrote: Great job ShenSun, the game has the vibe of shenmue, the music is of course awesome
wude wrote: i got the bad ending
if you need more screenshots/renders just lt me know
AdamKoralik wrote: Okay so time for my thoughts, because I was asked to give them.
1: The story was great. I highly respect stories that can correctly weave in to other stories and timelines.
2: Characters feel incredibly authentic.
3: Lots of typos, though I'm sure you guys are aware of this.
4: Would REALLY benefit from voice acting. Corey Marshall would make this thing work. Crowd sourcing for this might be something to be considered.
5: Remove any and all plugs to #SaveShenmue and channels (including my own). While nice, they take me out of the game. Imagine a Coca Cola ad popping up directly in Shenmue. Takes your out of it, that's why the vending machines work. Point is, maker your advertisements vastly more subtle.
6: The title MUST change. As it stands, my instinct tells me it's some kind of Shenmue themed Calendar. Simply call it Shenmue 1.5. It also wouldn't have such a time stamp on it (2013), especially one that has nothing to do with the actual game.
7: As far as game play goes, I have a similar complaint as the dude who made the let's play. The game doesn't seem...fair. In that, getting the bad ending is far too easy. I realize the idea is to give us a reason to replay the game, but the actual Shenmue games got away with this by having a solid story (which this game does), and we need to have that story conclude properly. We're Shenmue fans, I'm sure we all hate lack of resolution. So, point is, much like the original Shenmue games, getting the bad ending should be more work than not getting it.
Hope that all helps.
If you do cast for voice actors...let me know. I'd love to be in it.
AdamKoralik wrote: Oh I'd leave the casting to you. I'd be happy to record samples.
If you didn't think it sounded good, I would totally understand.
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