Great video so far! I was going to mention the Kickstarter logo but Ziming went one step further
I'd also say the last section needs trimming by like a millisecond so Shenhua doesn't flash up before Yu.
In regards to fight scenes has to be Don Nui surely!
Also probably a bit late now but I'd have a section about the emotional/relationship element with somr clips of the friends that Ryo has made along the way as aside from the technical/gaming elements this is what really sets Shenmue apart from most other gaming series and why fans have such a strong connection.